Common Mistakes

Dear Parents,

These are the sentences picked up from pupils' writing.

Free Writing - My Favourite Food

Run – On Sentences (no full stops)

1) My favourite food is hot and sour soup it tasted very sour and there is tofu in the soup.

(My favourite food is hot and sour soup. It tastes very sour and there is tofu in the soup.)

   2) Cheese fries has cheese the fries is made out of potato. I love cheese fries          fries is yellow colour cheese is orange and yellow.

   (Cheese fries has cheese. The fries is made out of potato. I love cheese fries.          The fries is yellow colour. The cheese is orange and yellow.)

   3) My favourite food is macaroni it have oil, chicken, carrot and soup i eat it on        every Thursday at student care, the auntie cook it for me, I can eat and watch          TV, it smell like oil. the macaroni is delicious!

   (My favourite food is macaroni. There is oil, chicken, carrot and soup. I eat it             every Thursday at student care. The auntie cooks it for me. I can eat and watch       TV. It smells like oil. The macaroni is delicious!)