Dear Parents,
These are the sentences picked up from pupils' writing.
Free
Writing - How I spend my holidays
Punctuation
1) One
December holiday. I went to Batam.
(,)
2) I
was so excited. When I went on the Royal Carribean cruise,
(when) (.)
Proper
Nouns
3) I
spent christmas.
(Christmas)
4) I
went to china.
(China)
Sentence
Structure
5) Me
and my sister enjoyed sliding down the slide.
(My sister and I enjoyed sliding down the slide.) (*My sister and I-->subject)
6) Me
and my brother and my sister play a game.
(My brother, my sister and I play a game.) (*My brother, my sister and I-->subject)
(My siblings and I play a game.)
