Monday, 19 January 2015

Common Mistakes

Dear Parents,
These are the sentences picked up from pupils' writing. 


Free Writing - How I spend my holidays

Punctuation
1) One December holiday. I went to Batam.
                                (,)

2) I was so excited. When I went on the Royal Carribean cruise,
                             (when)                                                        (.)


Proper Nouns
3) I spent christmas.
              (Christmas)     

4) I went to china.
              (China)

Sentence Structure
5) Me and my sister enjoyed sliding down the slide. 
 (My sister and I enjoyed sliding down the slide.)                         (*My sister and I-->subject)


6) Me and my brother and my sister play a game.
 (My brother, my sister and I play a game.)               (*My brother, my sister and I-->subject)
 (My siblings and I play a game.)

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